"Zip mode, the amulet, the camera, and the journal are constantly available via a menu on the bottom of the game screen.".".the camera and journal save the player the task of copying down notes and clues onto paper as was often needed for previous Myst games." Does not flow well."The mouse cursor plays an important role in providing visual cues for player actions and movement." Couldn't "plays an important role in providing" be shortened to "helps to provide"?."players travel by clicking to set locations called 'nodes'"-I don't think the "to" is necesssary."Myst IV: Revelation is an adventure game, with the player experiencing all gameplay from the eyes of an unnamed protagonist." This sentence is unclear, is it implying that all adventure games have the player "experiencing all gameplay from the eyes of an unnamed protagonist", or is this a general feature of the game?."A few publications such as Computer Gaming World took issue with the control scheme of the game." "A few" is too vague to be a real help to readers, might as well get rid of it. The prose really needs scrutiny by somebody else if I get the time, I'll be happy to lend a hand. – Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 14:06, 8 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Ĭomments, leaning oppose from Dabomb87 ( talk I'm not entirely certain about the other one. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:59, 8 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Just Adventure seems reliable enough for me, but I'm not exactly an expert on sources. As for forum posts, I generally fall in the school of "don't use them" but again, that's me being more picky than the normal editor. I'm not a big fan of the "it's an interview, it must be reliable" argument, but it's borderline enough to let others decide. I'll leave these out for other reviewers to decide for themselves. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 13:55, 8 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Heh. UruObsession is a fan forum, however the source being quoted is Mary DeMarle, one of the project leads for Myst III: Exile as she is an "expert" in Exile's development, it meets the requirements of WP:SPS. Ealdgyth - Talk 12:30, 8 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Just Adventure is a fairly large, established web site which features an editor who screens all submissions and does fact-checking at least once before release of a preview/review/et al (walkthroughs and release information on games has another editorial process as well the site refuses to refactor author opinions, but as the source is an interview this isn't an issue.) The source is being used only for the comments of the interviewee, not for opinions or facts stated in the interview by the publisher. Otherwise, sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. What makes the following sources reliable?.Giggy ( talk) 00:27, 10 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Incidentally, as the images are free (Ubisoft release), another one wouldn't hurt. (And what, no Uru?) - M ASEM 02:46, 8 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Images Look fine, box art non-free but well rationaled, screenshot falls under Ubisoft's free use on WP, though it probably could use a better caption as it currently talks about the reception of the graphics though its in the gameplay section.– Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 01:33, 8 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 21:36, 7 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Support Heh, I don't know if I can keep a promise like that. ) in any event, looks good, you have my support. – Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 21:29, 7 September 2008 (UTC) Reply įine: we'll make a deal: don't put any hurricanes at FAC, and I won't do any video games :P Made the fixes. Overall, Revelation was received positively by critics, with the game garnering 82% and 81% averages on Metacritic and Game Rankings, respectively "With" is a poor connecting word per MoS.Wall enjoyed working with Gabriel, and hoped that he would be able to collaborate with him on future projects.Comments zOMG video games! Where are the hurricanes?! :). :P but look on the bright side, before I inflict the last Myst title on you in the future, you might get lucky and have another non-video-game FAC from me :) - Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 21:12, 7 September 2008 (UTC) Reply Yes, you had your reprieve from video games in general and the Myst series in particular, but I told you the reprieve would only last a little while. Myst IV: Revelation Nominator(s): David Fuchs The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 00:34, 19 September 2008. No further edits should be made to this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination.
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